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Hrm...an archer/hunter. As a righty, I get a little thrown off when seeing someone (even in a drawing) shoot lefty. Still, it's looking good. As a suggestion, I'd have the left hand holding the strings having just the tips of the fingers holding the bowstring. Also the 'arms' (flexing part) of the bow should be a lot thinner, as in real life they'd need to be thin in order to flex. Next we come to the arrow. From the look of it, it's not even on the string at all. The flights are about an inch away from the back end of the arrow, and would appear in front of the fingers holding back the bowstring. Though the right hand holding the bow isn't in an exactly wrong position in regards to the thumb, I personally find it a bit awkward to do so. If you want a crude-ish visual depiction of my suggestion on what the overall hands/bow/arrow would look like, here: [link]
The overall stance is pretty much spot-on, too, for aiming.
All in all, though, it's looking pretty sweet.
Hope I didn't come across as too harsh, just trying to help you along in regards to the weapon.
The overall stance is pretty much spot-on, too, for aiming.
All in all, though, it's looking pretty sweet.
Hope I didn't come across as too harsh, just trying to help you along in regards to the weapon.